lol,good poem,i know what you mean.i'm in a tougher time of life which is like heaven and hell smushed together,it can suck.thanks for the comment on my poem.you said you thought i could be a great writer,i apreciate it.go check out some of my other stuff like Protection(my fave)if ya have sum time.its way better than note.thankies

I like the rhyming scheme. the content...well, I for one can identify with it.