Hey girl, GREAT poem ! I realllly liked it!
Keep writing & take care!
XOXOXO-Holly

A great poem. I look forward to reading more.

Beautiful.......just beautiful! Your an amazing writer, keep up the good work.
Take care,
Rachelxx

Oh yeah and thanks sooooo much for commenting on my poems!

climb the ladder and reach the sky...aha, my fave part!! great work!

God bless
love Heather.

Great job....beautiful work I loved it!!Keep up the great work! MuchLoveJJ

thanks bob, i really liked how you reworded it!! i really appreciate it!!

thanks for all the comments!!

Great job !! that remind me of mi man ! thanks again!

This was good, and I liked the theme, but maybe you could get more consistency in the length of rhyming lines. Try to make rhyming lines have teh same number of syllables. Good job though!

thanks everyone for your opinion.. and your comments and votes!! i really appreciate them..david, i dont realy notice the syllables much, i just write words and whatever sounds good..i keep. thats my theme.. but thanks for your comments!! :)

absolutly beautiful!! this is so incredibly sweet. you did an awesome job expressing the feeling of loving someone so much you will do anything for them. i love this poem!!
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

I know a song called "for you I will" I love it, and i love this poem as well. Nice work.

Excellent.. I don't know why.. but your writing style reminds me of something.. or maybe someone.. :S.. Well anyways. Its great and Keep it up :)

well done ... so many wonderful things that you can do ... there truly must be a lot of love flowing through you ... good job 5/5 ... oh and thx for the comments yours really meant something

beautiful poem, keep up the good work. 5's 2 u

great love poem

Beautiful poem and well well written ur very good writter keep em coming I love reading ur poems :)

Great work
thats how i feel about my girl :)
keep up the wonderful work
you really got the talent

please cheak out my poems too :P

Great work
thats how i feel about my girl :)
keep up the wonderful work
you really got the talent

please cheak out my poems too :P