oh my gosh...i read it in school too...but yea...okay...it was...good...and interesting...and a little bit KINKY

Jenna and Nic

wow!! that, much like all your other poems, is..can't find the right words!! very detailed and long!! lovedmit!! keep it up!! :)

Woah! That was soo hot! Keep up the good work & take care, try to check out a few of my poems too if you can
XOXOXO-Holly

Very Hot, I loved it!!

u always right the best fu(k poems ever, seriously. excellent.

God damn girl, makin me wanna hunt my man down to try some kinky shit like this. Definetly fukcin HOTT! Keep writin, i might need ideas later, lol...lotta love, peace

Wow! That poem was hott! omg! You made me want to invite my boyfriend over and try that for myself! seriously! keep up the good work... write some more like it! ;)

I know... but I have so many explicits that the titles get mixed up, and since this is the only one that has chocolate sauce in it at all I decided to name it that. If anyone has any better ideas for a name I would be open to it.

great wrk

Darn this was so hot and made me hot too. good work

Love it!!!

Omg that was so hot and amazing lol as me and my mates say it jus orgasmic lol

DamnNN that Poem is hOt! love it

Omg, seriously I want my boyfriend right here RIGHT NOW! hahah, that was HOT! keep it up!