You describe nature so beautifully...

Now that was a greatly written, perhaps a masterpeice. I like the last line the best, the imagery was vivid and strong, the word choice was excellnt. 5/5

That was extremely well written. It's like you were painting a picture in front of my eyes, but with words. 5/5
~Steff

Wow.
This is beautiful.
Had it not been for the slight off flow of the first few lines, I would have nominated this for the contest.

Wow. Just, amazing description, no doubt. I'm not sure what to say; this is simply amazing. I love all the metephors and similies; very beautiful. Nicely, nicely done.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

Very truth. takecare 5/5

Okay, I really loved the message this poem layed out there, something that may help is, space out your poem a little.. Instead of it all in one stanza, just every little bit would make it look better.

I was curious if this line was supposed to have this extra comma too.. It kinda confused me at first, but I think it may have been a typo?

"They crash against any, land, that separates us from our kin"

Supposed to really be "They crash against any land" instead of "They crash against any, land"

Not try to critisize you too much, I really do love your work...

I love each and every word you used in here, it's so different than most writing, even mine.. You do indeed have that poetic way about your poems, that most have lost or dont really know how to use. (Guilty myself)

Anyway, a excellent piece of work, keep it up, of course another 5/5

~Ally~

Wow, I loved this one, probably because I love metaphors. lol 5/5 m'dear, VERY GOOD! *gives you a cookie* :P

I like this alot its more then reading its more of imagining all that you express in this poem i like it keep up the great work

I really liked the ending of that poem the most. I liked the wording you used. Just one thing is to watch out for your spelling in this (should be "wears no protective skin" not "wares" and "any land that separates" - no commas). Sorry - I dont want to put a downer on that poem just know that I like to have things pointed out to me if I have let something go unnoticed - other than those two things I noticed, it was great!!! :)

Thanks for the great read - I love poems about nature! ESPECIALLY the waves and ocean.

Mo