its not really your best, i gave it a 4/5 it seemed disconnected and busy. you left out a few words..but other than that the concept is good, but know you can do better.
~Freak~

I do like this poem and she sounds great. I think you have talent and will be a great poet forever. Take care :)

Very interseting descriptions

I think it was excellent! Great imagery, and all together very interesting

Awww that was so cute!!! And amazing i really really loved the ending...it was excellent!

This reminded me of my boyfriend it is real sweet and you must have a huuuuge heart to write something this beautiful xxx alex xxx

Another great poem i love everything about it...It had a nice flow to it....The word choice was great...It was easy to read and to understand...beautiful....5/5

The love from this poem flows off the page and reatches all who read it.
the only thing i dont get is all the nature analogies. but it seemed to work here.
great job.
5

That was such a delicate poem.
You never strayed far from your subject and you clearly talked about the one and only one thing you needed too.