by Robert Jan 20, 2005
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
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I bare no teeth when I bite, |
by Britney
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great personification towards the end. I liked it alot great job ur very talented and i love your poems awesome! 5/5! |
by Clarissa
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another fabulous poem... go u! |
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I like this poem altogether but I almsot felt that it didn't flow very well. Maybe it's just because I'm not used to reading with long sentances. but good poem, you captured the idea you wanted well! |
by Nici
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Another interesting topic, which proved to be worth the read. |
by EoB
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Yeah, good poem, but I, as a fan of the wind, didn't really like how you made the wind sound like a bad thing:P |