i really love this poem, because it's different and i love the wind, it's my favorite element and not many people i think could write this good about it, well done

Another amazing piece of work. I thought mine had detail lol! I travel a lot and I love the beach. To me I was writing what I feel when I walk along the beach. I think I focus to much on the rhyme and the length. I am always afraid it's to long and starts to sound like I am rambling on and on. Thanx for your comments and suggesting these poems. It gave me an idea of what I am lacking! I appreciate that! Take Care! Brooke

Good job!

i like it. :)

you had a few spelling misakes but its a great concept and i think you expressed it nicely. i do feel that it is lacking something. it doesn't flow as good as it should. nice work though
~Freak~

Great poem! 5.0 ♥

Amazing like your others i read

great poem loved it

Jacs
xxx

They way you described the wind was wonderful... and yes you could of written some "good stuff" about it, but then again I think you did now that I'm saying this... and I think you did when you said "and in the darkest of night I will steal your heat.".
Well, anyway, I liked it alot and gave it a 5 :)
Keep it up, you're great *hugs*

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

Yeah, good poem, but I, as a fan of the wind, didn't really like how you made the wind sound like a bad thing:P

But anyways, the poem is good...some lines worked very good, while others seemed a little forced...

but you are a good writer..interesting too..

keep it up

Another interesting topic, which proved to be worth the read.

Keep Writing
Nici

I like this poem altogether but I almsot felt that it didn't flow very well. Maybe it's just because I'm not used to reading with long sentances. but good poem, you captured the idea you wanted well!

another fabulous poem... go u!

great personification towards the end. I liked it alot great job ur very talented and i love your poems awesome! 5/5!