by Robert Jan 20, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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by cAKE
I love it robert i can relate to it n so many diffrent ways. |
by Fsams
Dear this is another beautiful love poem from you. There are very minute mistakes in this piece like the use of you to your. You gotta check it once again. Again its having the nice flow and beautiful rhythm. 5/5 worth |
Wow!!..every line was filled with depth,intimacy n passion...n the word choice was perfect..though the rhyme did seem a li'l forced...iloved this work for the emotions it contained..kp it up |
by e LIZ a beth
Wow love the poem, great emotion. the image was portrayed well |
by Kaila
AWW!! |