This is great...you change "having sex" to "making love" I loved it!

very passionate and well written. the flow is good as well. no worries about your comment on my poem. on the contrary, thank you for giving me your honest opinion. everyone has different perspectives so i thank you for sharing yours. keep on writing!

You have explained, picture perfect love...Very well written.

Passionate, Well written, imagery was vivd, the best word choice, and the emtion was deep and strong. keep up the good work. 5/5

AWW!!
This is really cute!
I love the fact you compare joyable things to how much you love her
this poem was fabulous
definitly one of your better ones
5/5 great job

Wow love the poem, great emotion. the image was portrayed well

Wow!!..every line was filled with depth,intimacy n passion...n the word choice was perfect..though the rhyme did seem a li'l forced...iloved this work for the emotions it contained..kp it up
xxPoojaxx

Dear this is another beautiful love poem from you. There are very minute mistakes in this piece like the use of you to your. You gotta check it once again. Again its having the nice flow and beautiful rhythm. 5/5 worth

I love it robert i can relate to it n so many diffrent ways.
i was filled with so much n amny diffrent emotions u can only think or know of i write but i might need your help
*CUPCAKE*