Would you still be here?

by SweetDreamer   Jan 20, 2005


If others hadn't of told that lie,
that started the feeling that made you want to die,
would you have shed that tear?

If I had told you the truth instead,
which would have ended those thoughts going through your head,
would that be what you wanted to hear?

If I made sure I was there by your side,
not pretending like I was actually along for the ride,
would that have eased your fear?

If I had been the friend that I wanted to be,
and was not so afraid of what the others thought of me,
would you still be here?

**Plz, at least vote or comment. I'd love to see what ya think! Thx!

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  • 19 years ago

    by rachel

    Definate 5. Write what you feel and I guarentee you'll get the most beautiful pices of work. Good job.

  • 19 years ago

    by Gill

    rach i like this poem..it kinda confused me tho lol but u no me im like always confused ahah what does it mean tho? lol

  • 19 years ago

    by noworries2

    i like this....it is really good. IT is touching. thanx for the comment

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