My life as a solar system

by Sinister Soire   Jan 20, 2005


As I gaze into eternity
I realize I’m there
My soul goes on to infinity
Down to each last hair

My body is the planets
My hair is each and every star
I fly around just like the comets
Though I strive to make it far

My mind is the central zone
Where the people tend to go
It is the planetary home
Where the appears to slow

The center of this universe
Is my heart and soul
You can see in every verse
Though you are my main goal

copyright 2005 © Logan Brown

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  • 19 years ago

    by Elise

    very deep...loved it ! take care,
    E.

  • 19 years ago

    by SweetDreamer

    I loved it! The way you used the solar system to represent yourself..was really creative and u did it well. thx for your last comment on mine, it's appreciated, and feel to check out some more! lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    That was unusual. Really liked it a lot. Keep writing.

  • 19 years ago

    by shes ♥suicidal

    that is such a good poems... well all of you poems are real good... especially ashes to ashes dust to dust... you are such a great writer... yeah .... just like lisa i thoufght the ending was real good... well keep on writing ur real good.....

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Great write hun, well done...loved it =)...very unique! ^.^ <33 love you much <33 xxxx you're so amazing...don't ever forget it xxxx

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

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