i actually like it, the pure feelings. keep writing. im glad thatyou did that instead of actually cutting. the poem its self is actually kind of chaotic,, which for the topic i think it if perfect

wow...very deep...great poem babe !!! keep writing ;)
Take care,
E.

i totally relate to this! its like ur speaking out of my mind! i been really fcukedover tho so its ard to stop but u must be strong coz u seem to have stopped...i think i have... go to my profile and email me if ya wanna talk.
luv nanz

Its amazing and its is chaotic but its how you feel and thats ten times better than cutting... you truly are a great writer take care and hope you feel better