A Look In The Mirror

by Heather M Craig   Jan 20, 2005


Slowly I look over every inch
as black tears burn my eyes,
from every stand of hair down to my feet,
the more I look, the more I cry.

I look around the surrounding society
to watch lonliness pass time by...
Nothings there to hold me here,
the more I live, the more I die.

~!Heather Craig!~

**this is such a short poem but i wrote it while staring in the mirror crying**eh, yeah, i am even losin my skill to write:( **

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  • 19 years ago

    by christina

    hey ur noo way losin ur talent ur soo great at writtin dont ever give up wat u love and great poems hunz keep it up
    :D peace

  • 19 years ago

    by Matthew Lee

    Hey heather i feel for yah. Plz don't cry, you just need some motivation. But i understand how you feel, i feel the like i can't do as much as i can either anymore. Well love yah bye

  • 19 years ago

    by Mustardhart

    Nope lady, you arent losing a thing. Let me tell you some sense came to me in the following lines, and i thought this si so philosophical. "I look around the surrounding society
    to watch lonliness pass time by..."

    This is pretty. You must keep writing. I am enthralled!!! 5 all the way

  • 19 years ago

    by Knight_of_Blackrose

    Well thats a load of crap... You can't lose your ability to write.... It's like riding a bike! You can however lose the desire, and I really hope you don't do that. You can write extremely well and alot of ppl enjoy reading your work... so don't give up on it or I will personally flip out on you! lol
    KEEP WRITING
    Aaron

  • 19 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    heya heather,
    Girl, don't cry with your tears...
    Everything will be ok! *Big Hugs to u*
    And this poem was great!
    Don't doubt on your work... Be happy that all your friends come and see your awesome work!!!
    God Bless You without any tears:)
    **With Love Sedusha**

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