also great poem even if i know u could've done a bit better =) keep it up dude !

Keep writing buddeh. ~.^

-S~

aww i liked it...i feel it......so many missing pieces but you have to find them and put it all together...God Bless U
Love Heather

that's like exactly how i feel!! i was kinda surprised when i found this kinda poem, but i like it and its how i feel. good job!
~S~