yep it is!! "They poison you
They destroy you
They all want to control you
They all want to posses you" niceeeeeeeee :)

well written!!!!!!!

very good....

it was really good- a new look at something so familiar!

i liked this poem because i thought it was so true altho i think it would benefit from loads more description of the poision and hurt to nature and then the questioning why. just think id need a bit more depth to it! hope u dont mind me saying so! and hope u comment on mine too!
take care
xxxLoUxxx