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There was a boy
Who died one lonely night
Leaving behind loved ones
That hold his spirit tight
When he got to gods door
He was expecting less
for he didn’t believe in heaven
But confident he would past gods test
’What you did was wrong
How you lived your life
Look down my son
look to your wife’
He looked down from heaven
and was shocked with what he saw
his wife all alone
crying on the floor
’You were all she had
What is she to do
You made a promise
that you would stay together
Till time on earth was due’
Up in heaven he watched
His wife every day
Saw the pain he left her
Regretting the decision he had made
But unlike him she kept her life
being strong through sorrow
and she did put
all her faith in tomorrow
’How can I be in heaven lord
I feel like I’m in hell
Look at what I did to her
She’s not living life to well’
’You did this to yourself
No ones fault but your own
Your wife that you love
Is in a living hell
you had no faith in above
You took away your life
But forgot the ones you love
I gave you a chance on earth
to put your faith in me
But you ignored me and gave up
So this is where you need to be
You have to see what you have done
Forever you will watch the one you love
slowly dying because you left her
All alone and put no faith in above’
I will watch my wife
Forever from up hear
I will watch everyday that she sheds a tear
Know I can do nothing
That I’m stuck here
Watching hell from heaven
’You won’t be able to hold her
you can never hold her tight
you had your chance on earth
But gave up your fight
She has faith in me
I can see behind her tears
so you will never get her back
When she comes to me
Happy she will be’
She prays each day for you
and that I keep you safe
So I have you here my boy
but you have to watch her
suffer in her silence
All because you took your time on earth for granted
Now you are watching hell from heaven
Aww that's such a sad poem, it brought a tear to my eye, you are a seriously great poet keep up the good work!! and thanks for the comment on my poem :)