Lifeless

by rachel   Jan 21, 2005


Prick me I'll feel nothing, poke me I won’t jump back
Call me names I won’t cry, go on and tell me what I lack
Scrape me and I don’t bleed, cut me and I won’t scream
Shoot me I won’t beg for life, it’s never what it seems

Hurt me I won’t sink back, cheat on me and I don’t care
anger me I won’t get mad, frighten me I won’t scare
Hit me and I won’t flinch, chase me and I won’t run
Push me down I’ll stay there, this what you’ve done

Fight me I won’t retaliate, strangle me I won’t want for air
Burn me and I won’t plead, hate me and I won’t care
Slice me and I won’t split, beat me and I don’t move
Yell at me and I’ll be silent, I have nothing left to prove

Drop me and I won’t get up, walk over me I won’t speak
Gas me I won't breathe, but don't think i'm not weak
But pretend to love me then leave me, and break my heart
I’ll fall lifeless to the emptiness, all broken apart

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  • 19 years ago

    by shenoa

    wow, thats so sad. great job. really. this poem is crazy, makes me think you can read my mind. amazing job. keep it up. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Kalika

    Really awesome, I know how you feel, I feel the same way, and you just put into words everything I could not.....Great job.....

    Kalika

  • 19 years ago

    by Kathrynn

    wow....
    awesome poem
    i can totally relate to that

    keep on writing girl, you have some real talent!!

  • 19 years ago

    by SweetDreamer

    Fantastic poem! lol, it's really one of the most interesting and creative poems I've read yet! Awesome work. if u have time, vote or comment on some of mine, thx!

  • 19 years ago

    by insane authority

    loved it!! n the ending contrasts and works marvellously

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