Tired
by MissKat Jan 21, 2005
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I cried many nights. I cried every time I would go back home from weekend. I would cry and be mad when I found out that you got a new girl. But guess what baby I do still love you. I still love you a lot but I'm tired of this S and all of this lies so F it. I'm done hurting myself when no one care of what happens. |
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17 years ago
VerY lovinG sentenceS yoU useD herE. mE luV yR stylE oF writinG thaT keepS mE verY joY..... 5/5
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19 years ago
by Pauly D.
Now, before I say anything please realize that I'm not trying to make you feel down, rather to give you constructive criticism.
I think, first of all, that the issue that you have at hand calls for a little more length. I can tell you're emotional about and I understand that. Take that emotion and put some vitality into your poem and make it truly shine.
