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by Paula Jan 21, 2005 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
I hear a knock on the door Who could this be It's 10 O'Clock at night And mom has her key I start to think as I walk to the door Mom's a little late It must of been busy at the store I open the door slowly To see a big tall man Standing on my doorstep He had a tag that said Dan He was wearing a police suit He asked if he could come in I looked at him puzzled He had a sad grin I let him come in He looked around "are you home alone?" He said, listening for sound Yes I am I replied really scared Where is your father? He really seemed to care He died 6 years ago On this day He was in a car accident Under ground is where he lay The guy took a seat and had a tear in his eye What is it, I said As I began to cry I knew something had happened He tried to revive Your mom was in a accident She did not survive I have break down I fall to the floor Why me, Why me? My eyes start to pour The man picks me up and holds me close Come to the station for the night We have some options to purpose I am not going I want to see my mom I staying hear forever Cause everything is gone Except for my house and my little brother Mike Together We will Put up this fight So get out of my house I said pushing him out I start to scream I start to shout He grabs my wrists Where is mike He's at his friends He's there for the night He picks me up and take's me to the car Where is he staying Is it far? It's down the street I don't want to go I want to stay in my house I am safe there, I know --Not a true story.. please comment or vote, not the best--
by Spitfire
Thats really good !! great job !!! i like it !!! 5?5
by xRachelx
Very sad. Some of it could use a little work like the 'sad grin' bit. I didnt get how you could have a sad grin! But over all it was very good.