Pitter-Patter

Thank you for sharing this poem. It has much emotion behind the words and creates a relaxed atmosphere in it's reading.

Keep writing,
Nici

It's really a great image (that you put into my head). I really enjoy your poetry. :)

What can i say but, beautiful.
i loved it, good luck for the future, to you and your baby.
much love, and good wishes,
aylee

p.s. I am sure you are intelligent enough to ignore Megan's completly ignorant and idiotic comment. I knew from her first few words..."the poem didn't make sense" that she's much too simple-minded to contemplate this piece anyway, so any insult from her is worthless.
Sorry if i am blunt and rude megan...and I'm not saying that I'm anymore intelligent...but I can't help it.
Anyway, fantastic work mother-to-be, and i deeply appreciate honest and constructive critisizm (especially on my recent-it's important to me)so please feel free (if you feel like taking the time)

lovely and peaceful. I ejoyed the whole mood of the poem and the inspiration with it made the piece all the more lovely. The setting created a mellow and calming atmosphere with a sense of love and compassion set between mother and child. i loved your symbols, and the way you worded the text. I especially admired the lines,
"There she rocked him gently
The wind blew a gale outside
Catching all the sleepy souls unaware"
It sets the mood perfectly and creates understanding of the piece to the reader. Beautiful job