Tender and haunting. I very much enjoyed this poem.

I absolutly LOVE it, kind of weird, but thats what's so good about it. :] its an adorable peice of work, I can't wait to read more!

it was unique I agree..and that too, is why I like it...you can just see them there..love the imagery, great job!:)Michelle

Good repetition to add emotion and warmth to the poem. Another wonderful poem.
-Kate

Your a very talented writter

Very good reminded me of my grandmother very well written.

Ooo i get it, finally! i love it. its different and kinda makes you think.

I really wish i could write like you! Your poems are all so beautiful! 5/5 Loved it!
Becky
xoxo

It's probably not you -- I just need to be more open-minded to different styles of poetry

Another great poem...not too sure what the meaning is behind it though?
but the use of words and the way it flowed was wonderful!