by Madison Jan 22, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Star light, Star bright, |
by Noelle k.
this is a really deep poem very sad but very good, great write. 5 |
I like how your stanzas arent all the same, very good job there. I wonder do you realy do these things, or is it just thoughts you write about??? |
by Lydie
That's really good - and a good use of the 'star light, star bright' Well done. |
by ?
Thats a really great poem, love it! love the way you used that little rhyme xxx |
by Madison
Thanks Katherine! |