A poem of a father beating his daughter.
some points referring to how she is not sure if her death would be better than her life she has now. How she will never feel the love that she has stored up for someone to come along and accept. Just how the simple fact of her father doing that can really impact her life.
>i feel so much for those ladies out there, and yea there are fellas like me that have been beaten alot, i feel for yall too but ladies seem to get the worse from my viewpoint.

much love everyone,
take care,
-Allen

P.S. if you didnt like it plz just dont say anything, it meant so much to me to write about something that hurts my heart like not being able to protect the ppl i care about....

I totally see your point and at the mo I can relate to your poem its good and shows great writing!

Great job on this Allen=) very wonderful and i lvoed it..keep it up k and thx for ur comment on my poem..sorry it took me so long to tag ya bk..latez

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omg...allen!! this poem literally brought tears to my eyes! the saltiness is stinging. very wonderful and touching poem. i cant really describe the way this poem made me feel but it really touched me. this is your best yet!!!

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very beautiful poem and full of emotion

very beautiful poem and full of emotion

very nice and thanx fo comitin on my stuff to keep writin 5/5

great poem! i love it! really great emotions and i can imagine everything keep it up!

Love, Taylor

gr8 job allen,
I LOVED IT !! 5/5 check out my new works .. i love hearing from u ! keep up ur amazing work !
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Maybeth !

wow, you defently have amazing talent. this poem, wow.. im.. just wow. wonderful job.