I really like this poem. It was wonderfully written. Great job and keep it up!
5/5
Take care,
Cheerfully Cynical

Itz a great poem, good work, keep it up!
Love alwayz Carz
xoxoxoxox

very interesting read, i enjoyed it, very oringanal style, i like that! 5/5
kt

thank you everybody for the comments, im just about to go and return the favour. xxxxx

Good job you have lots of talent keep writing!

You did an amazing job here...I loved it...keep it up ! Take care,
E.

...This is really good ...your writing is priceless..Keep up the great work...~sherrie~

great poem has alot of emotion keep it up

i can feel your emotion within this poem... good job, i can tell this came from real experience and that you must of had to open up to write this... good job and thanks for reading my poem:)

ive felt like that so much! Very well written!!
luv kt

thank you guys so much for all the comments

This poem is overflowing with emotion. Amazing.

That's such a relatable poem, since sometimes I just feel my parents never understand me, and I think just teenagers in general would all relate. Great work on the poem, there's lots of feelings to be found in it. :)

this was a realy good poem, it flowed really well, and i can tell from the expressions that u used that the subject matter really fustrates you and means alot to you.great poem, i love your work, as its wieerd most of it i can relate too, and i think, and i may have said before, poems and literature may have a deeper impact on the reader if you can relate to the emotions in the poem, as then for the reader the feelings become real, like the author's.
keep writing.
if you could, read some of mine too .hehe. :)
polly
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Wow, I already commented on this one too! ( I was actually the first to comment) lol but it was great to read it again. Keep it up!

Sometimes I feel this way... but I recover and try to move on... wow I just got a great idea for a poem, thanks :) ah and great job, btw.

this is really freat! 5/5 I feel like this as well, home life sux even school beats home....keep on writin!
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

this is really great! 5/5 I feel like this as well, home life sux even school beats home....keep on writin!
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

great poem!! well written!! keep it up!! :)

Loved them all I hope to write like all the talented people on this site!