i think this poem is good...and not all stupid has you think...keep up the great work....take care...FIVE>>>

i love this poem keep it up ok

hey your poem is great and it is not stupid i gave you a "5"...keep up the good work

Hey god I guess people every where can relate.. because last weekend they guy I was with went to a party for a chick he "USE" to like as he had told me.. well I found out that he still liked her the day after the party. I was so crushed.. I mean I couldnt hate him for liking her because in the begining I liked someone else and he knew... and I told that trying to break up with him because in the begining for about a month he wasnt there for me. but then he told me about the party trying to be totally honest he said he didnt kiss her he just put his arm around her.. that night he started crying because he was so confused on what to do.. so I got off the phone with him he told me he loved me and yet how much it hurt me to say it back knowing might be my last I did.. well the next day at school he broke up with me.. but what pissed me off so much was when I was going to go to class so he wouldnt see me cry hes like can I have a hug so of course I gave in and gave him one and then the loser kissed me on the cheek which made it wors.. then he told his friends his excuses for breaking up with me 1. He liked the other chick 2. I was to paranoid?!? 3. it felt like he was making out with his best friend and now I found out he got with the chick the day after we broke up and has been to god damn chicken to tell me and yet in the end of it all some how I still love him....

Well anyways I was just saying things I needed to say that I cant tell any of my friends or it will get my friend gus (his Best friend) in a lot of trouble with him...

Well I really like your poem hope things worked out for you or atleast do.. good luck in all you do

Hey Joy, this poem aint stupid, it is really good, i really liked your rhyming, i truely enjoyed reading it! Keep writting and dont do anything stupid over a boy, he aint worth it!! take a look at my poems if you have the time. Take care love kay xx