I completly admire your use of text and choice in worded format. what can i say, your words are written well beyond a praising point. Your piece is absolutly beautiful, and the way you porgressed the outline was lovely and wisely written. A few lines i really admired,
"During came my end sparing middle’s modicum, a tryst solar my silence harem left to ye Alexander. Be thy land’s boon taken after me."
I love your choice of words, they really bring in an intelligent and poignant atmosphere for the piece. excellent, EXCELLENT work

Thank you love *smiles*.

After such a thorough comment anythin else would take away from how much I appreciate your time to write your comments.

I hope everything is okay, for I haven't seen anything recently by you?

~Liz

I wish I could say I did...but no, unfortunately not.

Thank you for answering me about yours. I'm glad for our discovery ;)

Take care.

Eternal darkness is light in a splintered mind's eye. Better to know my obsession than have need to gaze upon it.

Today I say it... you have a way with words, Bird.

This was really good.. I liked it a lot. :) Great job and keep it up!

God bless you!

I love the words you used. They're so beautiful and flow great.

Wonderful! Epic and gilded in its own right!

Knowing the history of the region, I love this line: "Whilst starving pessimism to gilding conquered hands molding life in on these sacred sands."

Quite beautifully defines thousands of years and the ripples of the many dozens of shifting conquerors.