by Jacklyn Jan 22, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Silence fills the air, |
by Lost Girl
your poems are realy different to others i read, and all of them great. i could really understand this one 5/5 |
by Minkus
I like how you mix non-rhyming and rhyming lines, I think it gives you more freedom to say what you want to say. |
Silence proves so much..the fact no one is there. Ahh perfectly written girl. With alot of emotion ;( I'm glad i took a moment out to read some more :D |
by Noelle k.
all i can say is your poem was great and wow.. |