all i can say is your poem was great and wow..

Silence proves so much..the fact no one is there. Ahh perfectly written girl. With alot of emotion ;( I'm glad i took a moment out to read some more :D

;;^^Kalah

I like how you mix non-rhyming and rhyming lines, I think it gives you more freedom to say what you want to say.

your poems are realy different to others i read, and all of them great. i could really understand this one 5/5
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