Asleep

by Brian Ahn   Jan 22, 2005


I lost you once
I lost you twice
All I can do now is try to forget
Try not to remember
So I sleep.
You came back to me and you said you were back forever
You were here to stay
You fell to your knees and began to cry
Everyone saw how you really felt
As they left, one by one,
It was now just you and I,
So you finished up your tears,
You cried your last goodbye.

I'm sorry that I can not re awake
I'm sorry that I wasn't strong enough to stay alive

But I said I would wait forever
And forever I will.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Well wrote, loved it <3 xxx

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    umm...very sad but still i thought it was a good poem. i hope things are better now.

    SoNjA

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    Great job, but sad. I hope things get better for you. Keep up the good work.

    Ash

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachele

    aw thast such a good poem keep up the gr8 work thanx 4 ur comment by the way

  • 19 years ago

    by Brian Ahn

    please comment

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