its crazy how you totally explained how ppl die for love, or wish they would! amazing, keep writing!

great poem! seriously i love it! it's so true. . . that's like my life i've been abused by my parents for so long and the one person i fell in love with broke my heart and i know he'll never love me back. . . seriously keep it up!

Love, Taylor

I love this poem...because this is the story of so many other girls and holding it inside doesn't do anything, but make it worse!

Honey, this poem almost made me cry!! I'm sooo sorry for everything you've been through. I would take it all away from you if I could!! I would do anything for you!! I love you to death! You are soo talented!! You're way better than me, and I had quite a head start!! I love you tonz Sheest!!
Shawna