aw.. :) cute. Well written- though with a few spelling mistakes.
BTW, your heading is spelt wrong it should be "When you're in love".
Still good, keep up the good work!

that is the best!

this is lik soooo kewl..keep it uppp u!!

Very nice, emoutionaly beautiful poem:) I like it! Just keep going on!

Great job Amy :) I really liked this one. I hope everything is going great with you. Keep your head up. And keep on writing!

Take Care, Jess x

Hey amy! Brilliant work on this poem! Keep it up! Peace n luv miaow

so good and so heartfelt, it describes every aspect to young love and true love

so good and so heartfelt, it describes every aspect to young love and true love

Great write, it really has a nice flow. Sometimes I'm amazed at how people can seem to fit everything into a poem and still keep the rhyme scheme and rhythm...seems like you did it perfectly.

IT IS VERY WELL WRITTEN.. I LOVE THE WHOLE THING VERY EMOTIONAL

Amy, you are an excellent author and I am always happy when I come across a poem you've written that I'm yet o read. I've read most of your poetry, and It is EXCELLENT. You speak with true emotions, and alot of them are wonderful. I especially loved garden of shadows and the army of lost souls.. they were very dark, but nonetheless, superb. I would love to talk to you sometimes if possible. If you have yahoo or msn messenger feel free to contact me. They are buckaduckala@hotmail.com and you_suck_no_really_you_do@yahoo.com I'd love to speak with you!! All my love
Andie Noel

Very good poem. love how u write. good job