i think its good so far...update me when u finish! can't wait to read the rest~ God Bless U
Love Heather

I really enjoyed this poem, I can relate to it so well, keep up the good work. Take care!
Sarah

good poem, i no how you feel somethin thesame apend2me (in a way)

kp up gd work xxxx

hey thats really good.
keep writing.

gr8 poem!! loved it ...i know exactly how it feelz..keep up da gd work....
byezzzzzzzzz

this is a really affective poem...you have talent keep it up :)

This is such a great poem! It's well written, but it's mostly because I can relate so much to it, since a friend or 2 of mine have done the exact same thing. Nice work! if u have time, vote or comment on some of mine, thx!

Wonderful poem. Its so sad, I think alot of us can relate to this one time or another...your poem contains so much honest emotion.

Look forward to reading more!

Check out my latest poem...Thanks.

Kind regards
Hayley