omg, that is SO STRONG, SAD and MEANINGFUL! the pain, you described it so well, and the pain you would be going through, exeptional! i have been hurt by bullys too, for no apparent reason, and i know how much it hurts.
Keep strong!
kt.

Wow, that was very powerful. It's so sad that society is like that. Ugh it makes my bones chill at the very thought of it. Still, I am glad that I took the time to read it, it was a great peice. keep it up! :]

-Cheerfully Cynical

wow very good poem im sorry about what happened ....it carries alot of emotion >5< keep it up

This was such a good poem! 5!!!!

This is an awesome poem!! its one of the best ive read! i love it!!!

xX-Katherine-Xx

wow!! excellent poem!!

That's so sad! So, so sad. It's a good poem. 5!

wow that is so sad and amazing and...wow! definitally a 5 from me

-jenn

THAT WAS SAD...I GIVE YOU A 5/5
GREAT JOB
MUCH LOVE
~*~HEATHER~*~

I loved this poem. I was beautiful but sad.
Your poems are all really good.

im speechless, really speechless. that poem was amazing, its brought tears 2 my eyes as i type. if that is a true story then i feel so strongly and deeply for you, im so sorry. i dont c how ppl can b so cruel, how can anybody do that 2 someone. they all need 2 b tought a lesson. ppl kill them selves day after day because of poisoness ppl like bullies who think they're it. it has 2 stop.
well done though, it really was a moving and emotional poem. take care luv lucy xx

This is really sad,I almost cried. You wrote such a sensitive topic amazingly. Very moving. 5/5