Very very touching and soo sad...if this is wats happening to u then im really sorry...it was emotional and made me want to cry..keep it up and stay strong...thx for ur comment..latez

*XoX Sw33ti3*

Very sad and touching. Sometimes things can go wrong, just look to our God to give us strength. lol

Awww, this is very sad, and I am so sorry if you are going through this. This is a very good poem though!

omg this actually happened to you?!?!?!?!?! i didnt eve know about it!!! i really liked the poem...but there seemed to be a few extra words lik eo, and really and stuff..but it could just be the way i was reading it haah but yah i really liked it none of your poems could be bad you're such an awesome writer!!

NICE POEM!! THANX FOR YOUR COMMENT!!! KEEP READING MINE BECAUSE I ALWAYS PUT MORE GOOD POEM!! U WRITE VERY GOOD!! WELL I GOTTA GO BYES

Terribly sad, but well told. I can only hope that this time in your life has come to an end with a suitable reunion with your mother.

aww~that is so sad!! touched my heart!
May God bless You...Love Heather

You are a really good writer. Thank you for reviewing my poem. Yours was touching and sad at the same time and you did a good job of bringing all of your emotions into it. Nice Job...Meg

Very neat poem! It was extremely sad though! Great work and thank you for commenting on my stuff, Im really greatful! Amazing poem Excellent job my friend..Keep this up!
Shannon

Thanks every1 for commennting, yah it happened, but it was a while ago. Things are going great now, and I'm just happy that time in my life is over.

o its touchin i like it<3

Wow is this true? You had me totally engrossed in your words with this piece Rachele - It brought me to tears because I have a feeling your writing from experience - it was too heartfelt to not have some truth to it - another magificant write darling!

omg im soo sorry!! i lost my dad while i was at school... touching poem and very sad, but it was great..keep it up!! :) stay strong!!

You continue to amaze me with your writing. 5/5.

that was really good poem, im so sry for what you went through, i hope things are getting better for you, keep up the good work.

I love this one!

aww....so sweet. It was well written and very sad. keep on writing :-)
~Sonja

are you kidding? this poem is amazing and im sorry. i keep you in my heart.
Take Care
Paulette

Oh man... that is a sad poem.. I´m so sorry... On the bright side, you are a hell of a writer

a very well written personal experience