i think its excellent! well written and deep! dont change a thing your a great writter rach! ;) love ya heaps keep up the great work and take care and keep posative (no matter how hard it is!) love ur big sis bec

i like the last verse. Well, a very good poem, very enjoyable. You have some real talent chicka! Keep on writing!! 5/5
luv kt.

gr8 poen i enjoyed reading it plz comment on mine