keep tryin for her!! God Bless

Love Heather

oww... that poem was so sad. i hope things turn out for you. But it was a superb poem and i urge you to keep writing because you're very good at it! I gave this poem a five because i truly believed it deserved one!

vedali

i liied the message behind the poem altho think it sryggled to flow. hope u dont mind me saying so and welcome to sunny UK!!!
take care
xxxLoUxxx

try to speak to her if you can and get back that firendship you want. really good poem try to split it into verses/stanza's and so it will flow better. take care

Hey just wanted to say hi and that i miss you, i haven't talked to you in a long time and i miss you. lol. we need to have another chat, and you need to help me find a name for my baby. I still don't have one and i am due in 3 months. but yeah. I'll ttyl.

love ya,
x-mE-x

Thats so sweet such a superb poem you write from the heart from the top of your head and deeply - great talent - one I don't have please comment and vote on some of mine thanks if u already hav

Always Keep tryin for your best friend....and by the way this was really a great poem keep the good job up..

Much love from

Mahamed