Endless pain

by Polly   Jan 23, 2005


Weak from the damage its done
She is all alone in this land far away
She seeks strength to get out of this hell
she has nothing but tears of dismay.

She's lost her friends and their love,
others doubted her and now so does she,
she has no confidence it's just paper thin,
she feels she will never be free

she doesnt know what's caused this,
but neither she knows the way out
there is no light at the end of the tunnel,
nothing but endless doubt.

So she gets on with her life,
and tells nobody how she feels,
but she prays that someone will help her,
anything to help her heal...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Its sounds like your the girl in this poem. its very good keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Carrotgirl

    Well you are full of surprises, Your poam sounds like someone who has been writing for ages and is quite skilled. (that second verse is magical). To be honest I saw you picture and thought you looked like you were twenty or so. (almost died when I say your age was 13)lol

    Anyway Im envious now, keep writing you have a gift and it would be a tragedy for it to go to waste. Keep up the great work.

    Elise

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Not your best, but it had some emotion to it which I really liked ... I'm not sure what else to say.. Nicely written.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    I loved how you ended with the dots.... it was like the whole thing was a thought and it sort of continued after the poem, okay am not making sense here but yes i liked it lol well done xxALLYxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    I can feel the pain is this. It's like you took the words right out of my mouth. I loved it, Honestly. You did a really good job on this one!! I can't even pick a favourite stanza, Cause I loved them all. Keep it up =] 5/5

    `natalie x-x

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