ratty,

I thought that your poem is very well written-lots of pain and despair behind each word. Sometimes, it is hard to judge poems...whether we like them or not...because you are writing about your emotions. However, just one advice-make sure to read over the work before you submit it, and always read your stuff out loud and see if you like the way it sounded-because I did that with this poem and I thought it was very well written. Keep writing all the time.
I'll look forward to other ones..ur on my favorites:)

Love,
Libby

Well structured poem. Great read :) Thanks for the comments! You caught me in a non-busy moment so im glad to return the favour. 5 all the way!

;;^^Kalah

That was a really good poem, keep up the awesome work. 5/5

~katie~

wow this poem is rlly good! well done .xxxxx

This poem was incredbile. Good job keep writing, and thank you so much for commenting on my poem it means alot to me!
Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

greAt poem. u have GReat skillZZz & ur WRitting is AWsome keep it up mwAZzzz!! XOx Stephy :):) p.S thanX 4 DA comment on mine mwaaaazz!!!

Dang..i love this..its awesum
im here if ya need to talk bout anything

-angel-
5/5

Awesome...

Wow this is very deep and i since ur talking about urself in it, if u ever need to talk about anything at all im here

Great poem keep them coming got my 5 vote thanks 4 your comment take care hun sarah x

I really like it and thanks for the comment

Wow thats really beautiful n deep, thank u so much for the comment on my poems it meant alot, and i hope one day i'll have half the talent you have. your an incrediable writer.

I can feel the pain is this. It's like you took the words right out of my mouth. I loved it, Honestly. You did a really good job on this one!! I can't even pick a favourite stanza, Cause I loved them all. Keep it up =] 5/5

`natalie x-x

I loved how you ended with the dots.... it was like the whole thing was a thought and it sort of continued after the poem, okay am not making sense here but yes i liked it lol well done xxALLYxx

Not your best, but it had some emotion to it which I really liked ... I'm not sure what else to say.. Nicely written.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Well you are full of surprises, Your poam sounds like someone who has been writing for ages and is quite skilled. (that second verse is magical). To be honest I saw you picture and thought you looked like you were twenty or so. (almost died when I say your age was 13)lol

Anyway Im envious now, keep writing you have a gift and it would be a tragedy for it to go to waste. Keep up the great work.

Elise

Its sounds like your the girl in this poem. its very good keep up the good work