Wow this is awesome... i understand completely and can relate... awesome work...

xx, PorteR

Very nice...keep up the good work.

I think this was a very well written poem in which you did a great job of expressing your emotions.

really good! love ur style of writing i really loved this part "Surrounded by love,
And sheltered by pain,
I have nothing to lose,
And nothing to gain"

WoW!!! This is a great poem, and I think that you have expressed yourself really well, without sounding like some kind of try-hard emo! It seems really honest. Good Work!