You have to realize

by Tiller   Jan 23, 2005


You may not know the truth yet
The truth is that i love you and
I hope you dont forget
4 Years ago the first time that we met
You truly have to realize
The love I have for you
Sure I told a few lies
But never one to you
You should know how much i love you
Your beautiful Eyes and all
the day i knew i loved you
my love was very new
and i just want you know
that i love you

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  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Awesome poem, I agree that it needs a little work on the rhythm, and the rhyming seemed a little forced. Otherwise excellent. Take care and keep writing

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very well done for someone so young I have a son ur age. U have talent so keep writing! Check out mine if u would Thanx!

  • 19 years ago

    by Janie

    i liked it!!! you'll be quite talented when you get older... i'm just a little older than you... so.. .haha good luck
    <33 Janie

  • 19 years ago

    by Chad Reamer

    it needs better rhythm,not rhyme but like rhythm
    but was still good

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