by Broken
why the hell is this a 3.7? wtf?! i liked it...the only thing that i didnt like was that it didnt really flow very well...but dont get me wrong, it was really good...and i did like it...and im glad that i know whats goin on! muahahhahahahahaha! lol...luv ya sis! |
Steamy |
by nandini
hey lovely poem sierra...although its the first one of urs that i'm reading...good. keep it up!!! |
by Broken
awww....thats a good one..and im glad i understand it...im glad ur happy sierra |
by alexander
Really touching poem |
I like it...it seems you sorta go with predictable rhyming, but the words you put around them make it unique and not so expected...so well done. Beautiful. |