Comments : Hold On (message)

  • 19 years ago

    by ** JeNa **

    this was a great poem , keep up the good work

  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    great work...i loved it...~sherrie~

  • 19 years ago

    by WhiSperNcUrsIVe

    wow thanks guys! that means the world to me!

  • 19 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    You are stronger than what you think
    Don't let them get under your skin
    Hold on tight, Don't let go
    Don't give in

    wow i luved tht..keep writing

  • 19 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    sooo gr8!! loved it!1 hey i have someting u can add:

    the past is just a door
    you forgot to lock
    dont blaim your self
    for something you never did
    or never meant to do
    its done and gone
    you cant change the past
    look infront of you
    and never dare to look back

    sorry if itz too much
    luuuved it!!
    byezzzzzzzzz

  • You did a great job with this poem...I loved it. As always, keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing new work from you...also great job relaying the message in your poem...MuchLoveJJ

  • 19 years ago

    by WhiSperNcUrsIVe

    ALI well the bottom is from someone else they were just giving me other things to put in here and i put it in here to see what every thinks...thanks!