Would you not...

by angelposer   Jan 23, 2005


Would you not want to die
If you would wake up every morning
To the bleak,cold world
That just wants you to leave?
Would you not want to die
If you were made fun of by everybody at school
Including the people that claim the title of your \"best friends\"?
Would you not want to die
If you felt like you do not belong anywhere
And only wanted to hide from everybody all the time
Because you were so scared
Of what they would think...
Of what they would say
Would you not want to die
If your own father hated you?
Would you not want to die
If you saw no way out of this spider web
That is called life?
Would you not want to die
If everyday it was the same recurring nightmare
That won't let you sleep nights?
Would you not want to die
If everyday you fell deeper
Into the bottomless pit
That has no escape-
No way out?
Because I do..
Thats how I feel.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    Very touching poem. The repition makes the poem I think. Straight from the heart, powerful.
    Well done.
    Take care of yourself,
    All my love,
    Laura.
    P.S. If you want help with your poems, I don't mind helping you out, but only if you want since you said you needed help on one of my comments.
    Oh, and thankyou for those comments too, much appreciated. :)

  • wow great poem its so deep and painful your a great writter but stay posative your talented i look forward to other poems

  • 19 years ago

    by PoeticMystery

    Im sorry to hear that, Cris. I'll pray for you. But I liked your poem because it came from the heart.