Im sorry to hear that, Cris. I'll pray for you. But I liked your poem because it came from the heart.

wow great poem its so deep and painful your a great writter but stay posative your talented i look forward to other poems

Very touching poem. The repition makes the poem I think. Straight from the heart, powerful.
Well done.
Take care of yourself,
All my love,
Laura.
P.S. If you want help with your poems, I don't mind helping you out, but only if you want since you said you needed help on one of my comments.
Oh, and thankyou for those comments too, much appreciated. :)