by Noelle k. Jan 23, 2005
category :
Life, society /
other
Why couldn't i be a bat or a flying cat? why don't people understand me and how i feel? why do friends say its going to be OK if it isn't true? why do people make me feel weak and confused? why do people act so cruel? why is the question in my all the time. why is it why all the time? |
by valenza
its alright. i think that if you criticise your own poem that you should make it better unilt YOU like it. you seem to have potential so jus keep writing. i want to see how you improve so i added you to my favorites. i think you might like my poem Everyday. if u do read it please vote and comment |