It Hurts A Child ...

by ♥-Sharon Ardern-♥   Jan 24, 2005


You never said hello when I said hi
You turned away, and said goodbye
It’s hard for a small child to understand
Why their mommy won’t hold their hand

It hurts a small child when they cry
And their mommy does n t ask why
It’s a horrible way to live
When your mommy has no love to give.

You never said you loved me
I can’t even remember if you hugged me
But mommy, I do remember the time
You hit me with the wood to put me back in line

It’s sad that I have no good memories of you then
And I never got to have any, you died when I was ten.
So I guess it doesn’t matter now if I say hi
Cos you can’t speak, but this time … you didn’t even say goodbye.

© Copyright Sharon Ardern 2005

* Written in character.

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  • 19 years ago

    by SweetDreamer

    this is a great poem, its so heartfelt, very well written as well. you're a great writer. if u have time, vote or comment on some of mine, thx!

  • 19 years ago

    by Hayley

    girl thats sad as hell.very deep tho. I'm sorry you had to live with that. hugs and love-hayley-

  • 19 years ago

    by Marta

    now that was so good, like, unbelievably well-written, the ending was wow! i can't find words to describe it, such a chilly feeling with so much emotion. keep it up hun xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    awww that is so sad :(:( aww hun...this is so touching and everything..loved it...hope everything with you is alright <33 xxxx love u girl

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