by *Amanda* Jan 24, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I can't tell you everything you want to hear |
by Athan
Good job, and about the earlier comment, to tell u the truth, i didnt even read it, im sorry i lied, but i just wanted to make u feel good, i later read it, and realized that ur poem actually did rhyme, ooops. Stupid me, well seriousley this time, this one is good, and so was your other one. |
by Blue eyes~
Member to check out some of my poems!! love ya! |
by Blue eyes~
Good poem! keep it up! |
by shenoa
the end kind of threw me off, but i really liked this poem. its sweet, yet so real. i think every girl can relate to it. great job. |