the end kind of threw me off, but i really liked this poem. its sweet, yet so real. i think every girl can relate to it. great job.

Good poem! keep it up!
5/5
-Tenniel

Member to check out some of my poems!! love ya!
-Tenniel

Good job, and about the earlier comment, to tell u the truth, i didnt even read it, im sorry i lied, but i just wanted to make u feel good, i later read it, and realized that ur poem actually did rhyme, ooops. Stupid me, well seriousley this time, this one is good, and so was your other one.