good poem, i really liked it, u really have talent, good job

That was excellent. Very descriptive and a good use of imagery. You're very talented. Kudos.

thanks alot and i appreciate the comments!!!!!

YOU ARE AN AMAZING POET.... GRAT JOB
MUCH LOVE
~*~HEATHER~*~

thanks!

thankz definately

Wow, great poem.. Keep it up Paulette!
5 stars for you!
Take care from September Spring

thanks! i truely appreciate the comments!

Another grea poem! Im adding you to my favs! 5/5

Great Poem =) 5 stars for you.. Keep it up.. Please check out my poems.
Take Care