Tainted

by Janie   Jan 24, 2005


I'm wishing you were here with me,
it's different without you,
loneliness is filling me,
i don't know what to do,

i only gave half truths to you,
but mostly tainted lies,
but never would i figure,
that would lead to our demise,

it scares me every time,
when i think of what could be,
forever am i missing you,
wishing you with me,

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jennifer

    Its good. I liked it. When you said wow on mine, was it a good wow or a bad one? Just wondering. =/.
    -jen

  • 19 years ago

    by Janie

    hmmm... i can't make it over.. i comes from the heart.. not a book...

  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    the conent of this poem is great but...you could do some work on it to make it over all better...~sherrie~

  • 19 years ago

    by ¤©h€€®ƒüll¥♥©¥ñ!c@l¤

    This poem was really good. I liked this part best:

    i only gave half truths to you,
    but mostly tainted lies,
    but never would i figure,
    that would lead to our demise,

    Thanks for the comment on my poem, it was really appreciated! Take care and keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by MissKat

    I love this poem. I wish I could copy right this and give his to my ex.. Cuz it's how I really feel. 5/5

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